2020版高考英语二轮复习专项技能保分练二十一短文改错20191211449

Test 1

[2019·湖北省联考] Dear Wangping，

How are things going with you? It's been six month since you studied abroad in England.

It is the first time that you had been abroad. Without doubt, it is hard to fit in the life in a foreign country. Have you got accustom to living there? And how about the food? As an exchange student, have you overcome all the difficulties you have learn English? Can you understand that the teachers say in class and communicate free with your classmates now? You are such smart that you must have been made rapid progress in your studies. Everything is OK with me. I often recall the happy days that we stayed together.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours， Li Hua 答案与解析： Dear Wangping，

How are things going with you? It's been six month since you studied abroad

①monthsin England.

It is the first time that you had been abroad. Without doubt, it is hard

②haveto fit in ∧ the life in a foreign country. Have you got accustom to living

③with④accustomedthere? And how about the food? As an exchange student, have you overcome all the difficulties you have

learn English? Can you understand that the teachers

⑤learning⑥whatsay in class and communicate free with your classmates now? You are such smart

⑦freely⑧sothat you must have been been made rapid progress in your studies. Everything is OK ⑨sowith me. I often recall the happy days that we stayed together.

⑩whenI'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours，

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Li Hua

①month改为months month为可数名词，前有six修饰，应用复数。故将month改为months。

②had改为have 此句“It is the first time that sb have done...”是现在完成时的固定句型之一，故将had改为have。

③在in后加with fit in with...为固定搭配，意为“适应……”，故在in后加with。 ④accustom改为accustomed get accustomed to doing sth.意为“习惯于做某事”，为固定用法，故将accustom改为accustomed。

⑤learn改为learning 分析句子结构可知，此处为have difficulty (in) doing sth.的变形。故将learn改为learning。

⑥that改为what 分析句子结构可知，understand为动词，后接宾语从句，宾语从句引导词在从句中作say的宾语，故将that改为what。

⑦free改为freely communicate为动词，应用副词修饰。freely意为“自由地”；free作为副词时，意为“免费地”，不符合语境。故将free改为freely。

⑧such改为so smart为形容词，前面应用so修饰；such常用来修饰名词结构。故将such改为so。

⑨删除been make与其主语you之间为主动关系，故应用主动语态，故删除been。 ⑩that改为when 分析句子结构可知， ... we stayed together为定语从句，先行词为days，定语从句引导词在从句中作时间状语，应用when引导。故将that改为when。

Test 2

[2019·重庆一中检测]Tea has a long history in China, dated back to 5,000 years ago. Obvious, it plays an important part in Chinese culture. A good many of distinguished poets and writers had written many masterpieces about the appreciate of tea and the love for it, among them was Lu Yu in the Tang dynasty. He wrote The

Classic of Tea, a first book on tea, but he was regarded as the “Tea Saint (圣人)”．

Chinese people take delight in tea­drinking. It served almost everywhere. Whenever guest visit, offering a cup of tea to them is a basic social custom. Tea is part of Chinese people's daily life.

答案与解析：

Tea has a long history in China, dated back to 5,000 years ago. Obvious ,

①dating②Obviouslyit plays an important part in Chinese culture. A good many of distinguished poets

③and writers had written many masterpieces about the appreciate of tea and

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the love for it, among them was Lu Yu in the Tang dynasty. He wrote The Classic

⑥whomof Tea, a first book on tea,

⑦the人)”．

but he was regarded as the “Tea Saint (圣⑧and/soChinese people take delight in tea­drinking. It ∧ served almost everywhere.

⑨isWhenever guest visit, offering a cup of tea to them is a basic social custom.

⑩guestsTea is part of Chinese people's daily life.

①dated改为dating date back to...意为“追溯到……”，无被动语态，此处应用现在分词形式作时间状语。故将dated改为dating。

②Obvious改为Obviously 此处作状语，用来修饰后面的整个句子，应用副词。故将Obvious改为Obviously。

③删除of a good many后可直接加可数名词复数，和many的用法类似，此处意为“许多杰出诗人和作家”，表示泛指，不需要of。故删除of。

④had改为have 句意为：许多杰出的诗人和作家写了许多对于茶的鉴赏和热爱的杰作……此处表示诗人和作家关于茶的写作这件事从过去持续到现在，应用现在完成时。故将had改为have。

⑤appreciate改为appreciation about是介词，后面接名词或动名词作宾语。故将appreciate改为appreciation。

⑥them改为whom 此处是非性定语从句，引导词作介词among的宾语，在从句中作主语，应用whom，指代名词短语poets and writers。故将them改为whom。

⑦a改为the “the＋序数词＋名词”表示“第几……”，“a/an＋序数词”表示“又一/再一”。此处特指《茶经》是关于茶的第一本书，应用定冠词。故将a改为the。

⑧but改为and/so 句意为：他写了第一本关于茶的书籍——《茶经》，(所以)被认为是“茶圣”。根据句意可知，前后句存在顺承关系或因果关系，而非转折关系。故将but改为and/so。

⑨在It后加is 此处It指代茶，与serve之间是被动关系，又根据本段整体时态可知，此处应用一般现在时。故在It后加is。

⑩guest改为guests 句意为：无论什么时候客人来访，给他们上一杯茶是一种基本的社交习俗。guest为可数名词，且根据后面的them可知，此处应用复数形式。故将guest改为guests。

Test 3

[2019·山西省联考]This morning my American friends Jack and I went to the temple fair holding in our city. When we arrived at the park, we were amazed at that we saw.

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There were such many different performances and booths selling tradition handicrafts. Since there were lots of games to play, food to eat, and performances to see, we spend at least six hours walking through crowds of people. Jack said he had great time because he not only tasted numerous kinds of local snacks and another dishes but also enjoyed live dragon and lion dances, waist drum dancing and other folk performances. We came back of home at about seven p．m., tired and happy.

答案与解析：

This morning my American friends Jack and I went to the temple fair holding

①friend②heldin our city. When we arrived at the park, we were amazed at that we saw. There

③whatwere such many different performances and booths selling tradition

④so⑤traditionalhandicrafts. Since there were lots of games to play, food to eat, and performances to see, we spend at least six hours walking through crowds of people. Jack said

⑥spenthe had ∧ great time because he not only tasted numerous kinds of local snacks and

⑦aanother dishes but also enjoyed live dragon and lion dances, waist drum dancing and ⑧otherother folk performances. We came back of home at about seven p．m., tired and

⑨⑩buthappy.

①friends改为friend 此处指Jack这个美国朋友，故应用friend的单数形式。故将friends改为friend。

②holding改为held 分析句子成分可知，此处为非谓语作定语，修饰the temple fair，且hold与the temple fair之间为逻辑上的被动关系，故应用过去分词作后置定语。故将holding改为held。

③that改为what 分析句子结构可知，介词at之后是宾语从句，该从句中谓语动词saw缺少宾语，应用what引导该从句。故将that改为what。

④such改为so 名词前有many修饰时，其前通常用so，构成“so many＋复数名词”。故将such改为so。

快解：当名词前有many，much，few和little等词修饰时，要用so而不用such。 ⑤tradition改为traditional 此处修饰名词handicrafts，应用形容词。故将tradition改为traditional。

⑥spend改为spent 根据语境可知，此处叙述的是发生在过去的事件，故谓语动词应用一般过去时。故将spend改为spent。

⑦在had后加a have a great time为固定搭配，意为“玩得开心”。故在had后加a。

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⑧another改为other 根据语境可知，此处指许多当地小吃及其他的菜，other意为“其他的；别的”，符合语境。故将another改为other。

⑨删除of 句中home是副词，其前不加介词。故删除of。

⑩and改为but 句中tired和happy的意思是相对立的，所以用but表示意义的转折。故将and改为but。

Test 4

[2019·长春市质量监测二]It's been a long time before I left my hometown. I remember it was the beautiful place with an excellent environment, and people there were very kind­hearted. Last weekend, I make a call to a friend living there, but he sent me some pictures of the city by e­mail.

From the photo, I can see that great changes have been taken place there. For example, the streets have become wide, and the buildings higher. Beside, the people are dressed modern clothes. Several modern shopping malls are being built.

My hometown has changed very greatly that I can hardly believe my eyes. I hope my hometown can become better and better in the future.

答案与解析：

It's been a long time before I left my hometown. I remember it was the

①since②abeautiful place with an excellent environment, and people there were very kind­hearted. Last weekend, I make a call to a friend living there, but he sent me some

③made④andpictures of the city by e­mail.

From the photo , I can see that great changes have been taken place there. ⑤photos⑥For example, the streets have become wide , and the buildings higher. Beside ,

⑦wider⑧Besidesthe people are dressed ∧ modern clothes. Several modern shopping malls are being

⑨inbuilt.

My hometown has changed very greatly that I can hardly believe my eyes. I hope

⑩somy hometown can become better and better in the future.

①before改为since “It has been＋时间段＋since sb.did sth.”为固定句式，意为“自从某人做某事已经多久了”。故将before改为since。

②the改为a 句意为：我记得那是一个有着宜人环境的美丽的地方，那儿的人非常热心。结合句意可知，此处表示泛指，应用不定冠词，且beautiful的发音是以辅音音素开头，故将the改为a。

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③make改为made 根据时间状语Last weekend可知，本句应使用一般过去时，故将make改为made。

④but改为and 句意为：上周末，我给住在那里的一位朋友打电话，他用邮件给我发了几张城市的照片。此处表示顺承关系，并非转折关系，故将but改为and。

⑤photo改为photos photo为可数名词，此处指不止一张照片，应用复数形式，故将photo改为photos。

⑥删除been take place意为“发生”，无被动形式，故删除been。

⑦wide改为wider 此处表示，现在的街道更宽了，楼房更高了，暗含与过去比较之意，因此此处应用比较级，故将wide改为wider。

⑧Beside改为Besides beside是介词，意为“在……旁边”；besides是副词，意为“此外”。此处应用副词，表递进，故将Beside改为Besides。

快解：学生如果看到beside单独在句首使用(后有逗号)，一般应改为besides。 ⑨在dressed后加in be dressed in为固定搭配，意为“穿着……”，故在dressed后加in。

⑩very改为so so...that...为固定搭配，意为“如此……以至于……”，故将very改为so。

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