八年级英语常见初中英语书面表达的几种方法含解析

一、初中英语书面表达

1．（·北京中考模拟）自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生处处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。

假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信的重要性，分享一次使你更加自信的经历，并说说我们如何更加自信。 提示词语：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing 提示问题：

Why is it important to be confident? What experience made you more confident? How can we become more confident? It's very important to be confident 2．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达

为响应我市“创建国家卫生城市”的号召，6月3日，5000多名市民以绿色出行的方式参与了“生态随州——环白云湖健步走”活动。请以“共建绿色城市”为主题，根据以下文字提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。 主题 Let’s build a green city together 方式 具体 做法 1.骑车、徒步出行 2.不乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰 3.植树造林 你的 建议 益处 避免交通拥堵，减少空气污染 让城市变得干净舒适 美化城市，保护环境 联系自己的生活实际提出几条具体的合理的建议。（至少2条）

注意：1．文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文的意思连贯，语句通顺； 2．词数：80词左右：（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数） 3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名．

参考词汇：吐痰spit 垃圾箱dustbin 交通拥堵traffic jams 环境environment

As a middle school student of Suizhou, it’s our duty to help build a green city._______ ______________________________ ____________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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3．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达

你们学校的生活丰富多彩吗？请以“Colorful weekdays”为题，介绍一下你们学校周一至周五（weekdays）都有哪些课外活动。 要求：1. 语意连贯，层次清晰； 2. 要有评价性描述； 3. 词数80左右。

4．（·北京中考模拟）根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你是李华，在你的生活中一定有人给予你无私的爱和帮助。某英文网站正在开展题为 \"The person I want to thank\" 征文比赛。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：谁是你想要感谢的人？为什么你要感谢他（她）？你从他/身上学到了什么？ 提示词语: mother, busy, take care of, cook, encourage, help, love, hard 提示问题:Who do you want to thank? Why do you want to thank him/her? What do you learn from him/her?

The person I want to thank

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5．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

某英语教育网站正在举办有关分享的主题征文活动，请你根据图示内容，结合自己的经历写一篇题为“Sharing”的英语短文。

注意：

1.短文需包括图示内容，并适当发挥。

2.词数80左右，短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Sharing

It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other.

6．（·湖北中考模拟）为配合我市开展“创建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。 提示：

1. 保持环境卫生； 2. 待人有礼，乐于助人； 3. 遵守交通规则；

4. 写出1到2条自己的观点。

要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1—3项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥； 2. 内容连贯，表达通顺。 3. 词数：80-100词。

How to Behave Well

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（·广东中考模拟）随着社会的发展，通讯的方式从远古时代的书信到当今的互联网，经历着巨大的变化。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。内容包括： 1. 你喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些？ 2. 它们的优点和缺点是什么？

3. 你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？

要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和姓名；2. 语意连贯，词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, 8．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

学校英语社团正在举办英语征文比赛，请你根据下表所列的内容要点，用英语以“Learn to Smile”为题写一篇短文，参加比赛。 生活中会有不愉快的事，如：…… 对自己微笑 对他人微笑 使你开心、恢复自信；使你忘掉烦恼。 使人与人更亲近，带来友谊。 微笑是一种人人易懂的语言。 注意：

1．短文须包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译；

2．表格中省略部分须用2至3句话作适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

4．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Learn to Smile

Smile is an attitude （态度） to life．

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（·山西中考模拟）书面表达请将作文写在答题卡相应的位置上。

在家庭生活中，我们会做很多关于我们青少年的决定，比如该买什么新年衣服，该怎样庆祝生日，该上哪所学校等。你认为在我们自己的事情上应该自己做决定，还是听从家长的意见？针对这一话题，九年级七班的同学们展开了辩论。

假设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的观点，结合自身的亲身经历，说出2至3条理由．．．．．．．来支持你的观点。（只能选择一方观点表达。）

要求：1. 词数不少于80词； 2. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

10．（·北京中考模拟）交流可以化解矛盾,增进友谊。当今交流方式很多，但人们之间的情感似乎越来越淡。

学校英语专栏征文，主题是“Ways of Communication Today”。假如你是李华，你对此很感兴趣，准备投稿，谈谈你日常的交流方式及你的感受。 提示词语： face to face， chatting on line， discuss，appear How many ways do you know to communicate with others? 提示问题：·

How do you usually communicate with your friends? Which is the best way and why?

11．（·北京中考模拟）善待他人是中华民族的传统美德。某英文网站正在开展以“团结友善”为

主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，说说你对善待 他人的看法，你曾经友善待人的经历，以及你的感受。 提示词语： important, help, happy

提示问题： ● What do you think of being kind to others?

● What did you do? ● How do you feel?

Being kind to others is a traditional virtue （美德） of Chinese people. ______ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________

12．（·天津中考模拟）根据联合国教科文组织的统计显示，北欧国家国民每年读书24本左右,美国人年均阅读7 本书，.韩国人11本书，日本、法国国民每年读书数量为8.4本左右，而中国国民人均读书数量低于5本。你的阅读量是多少？作为一名中学生，你应该怎么做？请根据下列表格中所给要点，写一篇英语短文。 读书好 好（hào）读书 读好书 要 点 1.书籍是良师益友； 2.获取知识,带来快乐； 3.让读书成为日常活动； 4.选择适合自己并有益于身心健康的书； 5.—本好书改变人的一生。 要求:1.文中必须包含表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥； 2.条理淸晰,字迹工整，词数不少于80； 3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息： 4.开头和结尾部已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:身心健康：mental and physical health

Nowadays,reading is becoming more and more popular among us._____________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Let’s be active readers and enjoy reading.

13．（·山东中考模拟）初中生活即将结束，学校英语俱乐部特邀你写一篇英语短文,给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。 内容要点如下：

1. 初中科目更多，好的学习方法很重要； 2. 锻炼身体，保持健康；

3. 参加社团活动，使学校生活丰富； 4. 多读书，多交朋友； 5. 补充一两点个人想法。 注意：

1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数：60－80；

3. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译； 4. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：method n. 方法 club n．社团 colorful adj.丰富的 Welcome to our school!

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 14．（·黑龙江中考模拟）话题作文：根据汉语提示和要求写一篇短文。（A和B两篇，可任选一篇）

现在有许多新的购物方式，网上购物就是其中的一种。越来越多的人熟悉和喜欢网购，但是网购有利有弊，请根据下面提供的信息用英语以“Online shopping”为题写一篇短文，描述网购的优点和缺点，并谈谈自己的看法。

优点：1、可以在任何时候购物；2、只需要一台电脑和鼠标；3、方便比较同类产品的价格，可以省钱；

4、无论何时何地都可以收到所购物品。

缺点：1、网上付款有时不安全；2、看不到实物，也不能试穿衣服。

注意：1、语意连贯，表达准确；2、词数80－100。字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。 15．（·广东中考模拟）书面表达

以下图画呈现了林涛和梅梅在公园里发生的事情。请用英语写一篇约100词的短文。 要求：1.完整叙述图画内容。 2.简要陈述你从中学到了什么。

16．（·四川成都外国语学校中考模拟）Writing.

In the past, most Chinese families have got one child in them. But recently, the government has relaxed the family planning policy, which means each couple are allowed to have two children. Would you like to have a brother or a sister who grows up together with you?

Now please write a passage of about 80-120 words to introduce your opinion. The following points should be included:

1. Is it necessary for a family to have more than one child? Give at least two reasons for it. 2. What’s the situation in your family? Are you the only child or not? List what makes you happy and unhappy.

3. Give at least two suggestions to the families with two children. 17．（·海南中考模拟）书面表达

年1月以来，琼海市开始推广使用共享单车，你对这一举措有什么看法？请根据下面的表格提示内容写一篇短文，谈谈共享单车的利弊及使用共享单车的建议，以便在英语课上与同学们交流。

advantages: save energy, air pollution shared bikes disadvantages: park in wrong places, bike accidents suggestions: follow the traffic rules, care for bikes, don’t bring home 要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 必须包含所给提示，但不要逐字翻译，并做适当发挥； 3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；

4. 词数80左右。（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）

Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think …

What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle? 18．（·江苏中考模拟）某英语报开展“How to deal with the exam stress?”征文比赛，请你根据表格中的提示内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。 适当的压力 1. 积极思考，认真学习 2. 及时复习，防止遗忘 1. 无法入睡，非常疲惫 2. 害怕考试，导致失败 1. 合理计划，准备充分 2. …… 过重的压力 应对的措施 注意：

1. 词数90左右，短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 表格最后一栏中省略部分须用1-2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥。

How to deal with the exam stress

Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. _________________________

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在英语课上，同学们就自己喜欢的旅游方式展开了讨论。请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，并谈谈自己的想法。

◆有导游，不会迷路； 团队旅游 ◆不必自己找食宿 ◆结识朋友，互相帮助 ◆自由安排时间； 个人旅游 ◆选择自己喜欢的旅游景点； ◆学会照顾自己 你的想法 …… 注意事项：

1．文章必须包括表中全部内容，可适当增加细节； 2．想法至少在两句以上；

3．词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：

团队旅游travel with a group 个人旅游travel alone

Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．

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时间过得飞快，似乎几个月前才进入初三，现在中考却近在眼前。请以“Are We Ready for the Challenge?”为题，用英语写一篇短文，内容要点如下：

1．你发现老师现在上课语速很快。由于有太多的作业和考试，学生没有足够的时间来进行课外活动；

2．有的同学以前学习不太努力，但现在他们已经意识到这次考试的重要性，并且全身心投入到学习中去；

3．你在这最后一个月里的打算和安排…… 注意：

1．短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．第3要点的内容须用2至3句话作适当发挥；

3．词数90左右，短文的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Are We Ready for the Challenge?

How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming soon!

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I'm sure we will do well in the coming exam if we try our best!

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一、初中英语书面表达

1．It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we

do. S

解析：It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.

When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident. To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.

【解析】本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如at the beginning of； know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。

2．As a middle school student of Suizhou, it’s our duty to help build a green city. We can avoid the t

解析：As a middle school student of Suizhou, it’s our duty to help build a green city. We can avoid

the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. We mustn’t throw rubbish or spit anywhere. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a

comfortable life. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city beautiful.

In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. I can also save the energy by turning off the lights when leaving the room. In a word, everyone can play a part in building our city. 【解析】

本文属于给出一个主题，对这个主题的相关内容进行论述。实际上就是要求书写一份倡议书。人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料，确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，并补充两条个人的观点。注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，丰富文章的文采。 高分句型一：

We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. 通过骑自行车或步行，这样就可以避免交通阻塞，减少空气污染。and是并列连词，连接的是两个相同的谓语，by是介词，意思是\"通过某组织方式\"。 高分句型二：

In my daily life，I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. 在我的日常生活

中，无论我走到哪里，我会捡垃圾，把垃圾放进垃圾箱里。pick up是固定短语，意思是\"捡起\"，put into是固定短语，意思是\"放进\"wherever引导的是让步状语从句，从句的意思是\"无论我到哪里\"。

3．Colorful weekdays

It is my honor to show you our colorful activities and today I mainly tell you so

解析：Colorful weekdays

It is my honor to show you our colorful activities and today I mainly tell you something about the part time activities in my school. Here is an introduction of my school’s part time activity. Our school has various activities after class. The activities begin at 4：20 and end at 5：20 every day. The groups on different subjects include sightseeing, speech contests, art festival, volunteer activities, and sports meeting and so on.

Among them, I would like to take part in the sightseeing and art festival the most. Because the activities are wonderful.

So I really hope that we can have less homework so we can have more time to participate in the part time activities to relax ourselves. Hope you can join us and enjoy every moment in my school! 【解析】话题作文写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。

4．The person who I want to thank most is my mother. When I was ill she looked after me carefully. If

解析：The person who I want to thank most is my mother. When I was ill she looked after me carefully. If I felt upset, she would talk to me and encourage me. She is not only my mother but also my best friend. I real want to say thanks to my mother. I also want to tell her I will love her forever.

【解析】这是一篇话题作文。要求以\"The person I want to thank\"为题写一篇短文，内容包括：谁是你想要感谢的人？为什么你要感谢他（她）？你从他/身上学到了什么？根据所给出的材料内容可知本文时态用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一人称和第三人称。在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，注意不要出现语法错误。另外，可以用上一些句型、短语，较高级的语言，这样会使文章更出色。最后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

5．It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our

解析：It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our lives. We can share our happiness or trouble. Some of us like sharing face to face while others prefer to share online like QQ or Wechat.

Once, I failed in a Math test. I had difficulty cheering myself up, but I realized keeping worries to

myself would make it worse. After sharing it with my friend, I felt much better. Moreover, his words encouraged me a lot.

In my opinion, sharing is really helpful. It can bring us more joy and provide us with useful suggestions. 【解析】

此篇书面表达的话题是“分享”。首先我们根据给出的图表确定要写的内容的提纲，包括：分享什么？为什么分享？怎么分享？然后根据每个提纲给出的一些关键词，列出写作要点及每个要点可能用到的表达，拓展思维，写出自己的看法。最后，我们还要注意“分享”的情感教育，让我们学有所获。文章时态要用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一人称。在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

6．In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activitie

解析：In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.

Our city should be kept clean every day, so it’s bad manners to litter everywhere. And we should be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. It’s also important for us to follow traffic rules. We can only go across the road ,when the traffic lights are green. What’s more, we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

Let’s action now. I believe, the better we behave, the more civilized our city will be. 【解析】 【详解】

本文是一篇提纲作文，要求是为配合我市开展“创建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。根据所给提示内容可知，这是一篇演讲稿，讲我们应该如何做才是文明举止，因此人称用第一人称we来写，时态用一般现在时，重点句型及短语：in order to为了，try one's best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事，be friendly to sb.对某人友好，be ready to do sth.乐于做某事，It’s +adj.（ for sb.） + to do sth.做某事对某人来说怎么样。had better not do sth.最好不要做某事，也可用到should等情态动词或祈使句。

7．As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer t

解析：As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.

Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However,

sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.

In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones. 【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。 【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些；接下来介绍它们的优点和缺点是什么，以及使用现代通讯工具要注意什么；最后呼吁号召大家合理使用现代通讯工具。此处prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

8．Learn to Smile

Smile is an attitude to life．In our life, there may be something unpleasant．For exam

解析：Learn to Smile

Smile is an attitude to life．In our life, there may be something unpleasant．For example, we may fail in an exam or we may be laughed at for some reason．These unpleasant things may make us feel bad．Why not learn to smile? Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence．It can also make us forget our worries．We should also learn to smile to others．It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us friendship．So, smile is a language that everyone can easily understand．

【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了大量短语，例如in our life，may be，something unpleasant，for example，fail in，laugh at，why not，cheer up，help sb. to do，get closer to，each other等。同时Why not learn to smile? / Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence./ It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us friendship.等多种特殊句式和非谓语动词结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，条理清晰，表达流畅，是短文的亮点。

点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用一般现在时，可把提示内容结合实际展开合理的想象，把它们翻译拓展成一个个英文句子。还要注意在行文中使用一些常见的短语，会给习作增色。

9．One possible version：

At home, I think teenagers should make their own choices. Learning to make ou

解析：One possible version：

At home, I think teenagers should make their own choices. Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.

After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study. Unlike other students, I didn’t need my parents to be with me when I was studying. With the development of this learning habit, I soon realized that I could do better in study than other classmates who often depended on teachers and parents. Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.

There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it comes to our personal things. Everyone needs to learn to grow up to get prepared for future life.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们写一篇议论文，论点是：在我们自己的事情上，我们应该自己做决定，还是由家长来做决定。关于这个话题每个人都会有自己的看法，题目要求我们任选一个观点来讲述，并结合自己的亲身经历，给出2到3个理由。写作之前，我们应先从正方和反方中选择一个，作为自己的观点，然后围绕这一观点阐述自己的理由。这是一篇话题作文，题目中并没有给我们规定具体的写作内容，我们应发挥自己的想象力，结合自己的日常生活来组织语言，丰富文章的内容。写作时还应注意的是语言的表达，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，我们不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译，而是从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型，多用简单句，如主谓宾、主系表的结构，点缀几个复合句或并列句，调整文章节奏，让文章的句子富于变化，有新鲜感。高级句型或词汇的使用也可以提升文章的档次，在语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意表达连贯、流畅。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，观点明确，结构合理。短文作者选择了正方的观点，第一句话先点明自己的观点是什么，接下来围绕这一观点进行阐述，并从自己的经历出发，阐述了自己持有这一观点的理由，充分、合理，有说服力。最后一段作者重申自己的观点，并进行了总结。其次短文中使用了正确的时态、人称，文章以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范。句式表达符合英语的表达习惯，简单句为主，也使用了较多的复合句和高级句型，如状语从句、宾语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词等。有些句子较长，是由于使用高级句型所致，一味使用较长的句子也会导致文章的冗长，让读者感觉比较累，因此要注意调整文章的节奏。短文中较好的句型和短语有Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.、After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study.、Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.、There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. 、Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it comes to our personal things.等。

10．There are some ways to communicate with others, such as talking face to face, singing songs, using

解析：There are some ways to communicate with others, such as talking face to face, singing songs, using body and sign language, writing a letter, chatting on line, sending text messages. My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other. We often send

text messages, too. We can discuss our homework, talk about our interesting games. Sometimes we make phone calls.

I think the best way to communicate is the mobile phone. It is one of the most welcome and useful inventions. After mobile phones appear, communication becomes easier and rapider. With the help of the phones, people can keep in touch with anyone at any time and in any place. （118）

【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如communicate with others，such as，face to face，body and sign language，chatting on line，have a talk，each other，text messages，talk about，the best way，one of the most welcome and useful inventions，easier and rapider，with the help of，keep in touch with，at any time and in any place等。而My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other./ I think the best way to communicate is the mobile phone.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用一般现在时，可把提示的内容逐词翻译并拓展成不同的句子，最后把这些句子连在一起即可。

11．Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. I think it’s very important for eve

解析：Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. I think it’s very important for everyone. When I started middle school, my friend Peter failed in the English exam last year. He was so sad that he wanted to give up. When I knew this, I encouraged him and gave him some advice. Every day we did homework together, when he met some difficult English problems, I would help him to work them out. Little by little, with my help, he improved his English skills. At the end of this term, he made a great progress. He was very happy, I was also proud. 【解析】 试题分析：

本题要求谈谈对善待他人的看法，曾经友善待人的经历，以及你的感受。短文要覆盖提示的所有要点，并适当发挥。文中正确使用时态（过去时）来描述过去的经历以进行表达，使用第一人称形式进行写作。但也要注意在总结自己的感受，谈论观点的时候要使用一般现在时表明看法。 写作亮点：

短文开始就引入话题；提出了善待别人是传统美德，借助动名词做主语（Being kind to others is…），之后介绍了一段自己的经历，表意清晰，中心明确，动词过去时使用正确。有几个短语和结构的使用堪称亮点，如：so…that…; give up, give sb some advice, work out, little by little, with my help，丰富的短语交错使用，使得故事表达清晰具体，切合主题，主旨鲜明突出。

12．Nowadays，reading is becoming more and more popular among us． People often say that gold and silver

解析：Nowadays，reading is becoming more and more popular among us． People often say

that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．But I don't think so．In my opinion，to read books is more valuable than anything else．The old saying\"To open a book is always helpful\"clearly tells us how good it is to read a book．Books are our friends．They introduce us different kinds of knowledge．They lead us down the road to success．Books are our teachers．They teach us troth，science，literature，and philosophy of life．Besides，they increase our knowledge，enlarge our experience，strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them．Books tell us what is good and what is evil．And only books can tell the good from the bad．Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students．

As a middle school student．I think we should read more books．Reading is good for our physical and mental health．

Let's be active readers and enjoy reading．

【解析】这是一篇材料作文，行文之前，把表格里的要点内容通读一遍，做出框架，开始写作时，把表格里所列内容全部表述到文章中，并且自己适当增加内容，注意人称、时态、单复数，词形的变化。适当增加衔接词，使文章更出彩。如对长句不好把握，就尽量使用短句。

13．I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of

解析：I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you.

Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life. 【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，自己即将毕业，给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。结合所给的材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，以第一人称为主，要注意主谓一致，所写的句子要符合英语语法，用自己熟悉的单词和句式来写。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，开头两句很自然地过渡到正文上来。用了短语和句式，如：graduate from毕业于；share sth with sb和某人分享某事；wait for等候等，用来一些过渡词或短语，如：Firstly, Secondly,In other words, At last等，上下文衔接很自然。

14．Online shopping

There are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them. Online sho

解析：Online shopping

There are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.

Online shopping has several advantages. First, you can shop at any time. Second, to shop on the

Internet you only need a computer and mouse. Third, you can compare the prices of the same product and save money. You can also receive it anywhere in the world at any time!

But shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Paying over the Internet isn’t always safe. You can’t see the product or try the clothes on.

I think our life is changing because of online shopping. One day no one will go to the shops any more, because you’ll be able to buy almost anything on the Internet.

【解析】本文属于材料作文，要表达网络购物的利与弊。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如advantage, at any time, the price of, disadvantage, try on, not...any more等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

15．One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering

解析：One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said,

“Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them. Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them. 【解析】

这是一篇看图作文，要求我们仔细观察图片，弄清楚里面发生的事情，用英语将这些内容完整地叙述出来，并简单陈述自己从中学到的东西。因此写作前，要仔细看图片，了解图片中所发生的事情，并提炼出要点，列出所要用到的词汇、短语等，或者列出大概的写作提纲。通过分析可知，这篇短文讲述的是过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。写作时要注意按照事情发展的先后顺序，这样可以使文章条理清楚。还需注意的是英语表达和汉语的习惯不同，不能逐词去翻译，应从句子整体考虑，使用简单句的基本句型，如主谓宾结构或主系表结构。在文章中点缀几个并列句、复合句或复杂句式，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，符合图片所传达的信息，表述准确。作者在短文中叙述了林涛和梅梅两人在公园里给小树浇水、并挂牌子告诉人们注意保护树木。整篇文章按照事情发生的先后顺序叙述，条理清晰。文章最后的两句话也点明了文章的主题。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时态为主，谓语动词用了过去式，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式的形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。语法规范、准确。短文中还使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die.这句话中使用了并列句和宾语从句；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree这句话中使用了句型decided to do sth.决定做某事；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their

teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.这两句话中用了短语after that, speak highly of等等。

16．First of all, two-child policy is the gift for some only child.For some families. maybe the parents

解析：First of all, two-child policy is the gift for some only child.For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy. Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples.

In my family ,my parents have a only child. I also have some happy things.I can enjoy some delicious food by myself. But I have no playmate in my family. Sometimes. I may feel lonely. If parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents. It would be much better. Also, two-child policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population. 【解析】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如first of all，grow up，grow older，marry with，burden on，have to do， take care of，by oneself，have no playmate，the number of等。而For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. / when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally,/ It would be much better.等多种表猜测句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

17．Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for wo

解析：Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think it’s a good idea. As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution. What’s more, it costs little to use them. However, some people park bikes in wrong places after they use them. Sometimes it’s hard to find a bike on the street. And bicycle accidents do happen once in a while, so we must be careful when riding. Never ride too fast and always follow the traffic rules. At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes. Don’t bring it home or keep it your own. What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如on the street，a good idea，as we know，help sb. do sth.，save energy，what’s more，park bikes，in wrong places，once in a while，be careful，at the same time等。而As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution./ What’s more, it costs little to use them. / At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes.等多种插入语句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容

经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

18．How to Deal with the Exam Stress

Everyone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a

解析：How to Deal with the Exam Stress

Everyone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them．So we can pass the exams easily．

However，if we have too heavy stress，we can't sleep well at night and we may feel too tired．We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end．

In my opinion，to deal with stress，we'd better plan and prepare well．We should also form some good habits，such as enough exercise and healthy diets．Then we'll feel relaxed and do well in the exams． 【解析】

试题分析：本书面表达以“How to deal with the exam stress”为题写一篇作文。在题目中给出了一张表格，需要用正确的英语将表格中的内容表达出来。分析表格可以看到，这篇作文的内容主要有三个方面，第一个是适当的压力对我们是有好处的；第二个是过多的压力对我们有害；最后发表自己的看法，如何来应对压力。因此这篇作文可以分为三段来写，这样可以使整个文章的结构有层次。在每一段中加上具体的内容，使段落更加充实。最后还要补充两点自己的观点。全文需要使用一般现在时态，第一人称来写。注意多使用一些好的句式、短语，增强文章的表现力。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的范文。作者按照题目要求把表格中的内容完整的表达出来，并加上了自己的看法。作者将整篇短文分成了三个部分，首先写的是适当的压力对我们有利。这里作者主要使用的句型或短语有besides，还用到了一些复合句，如条件状语从句等； 接下来作者写的是过多的压力的害处，段首先用however来进行转折，然后使用了一个复合句if we have too heavy stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired.虽然很短，但是意思很完整；最后作者发表了自己的观点，用了短语in my opinion，还用到了提建议时经常用的had better 和should。整篇作文意思连贯，语言流畅，层次分明。

19．Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to tr

解析：Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide's help, they won't get lost and they don't need to look for hotels or restaurants by themselves．Besides, they can make friends and help each other while travelling．

However, other students prefer to travel alone． That's because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favourite sights．What's more, it's a chance for them to learn to look after themselves．

For me, I'd like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like． In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better．

【解析】这是一篇图表，要求谈谈自己对不同的旅游方式的看法。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

20．Are We Ready for the Challenge?

How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few

解析：Are We Ready for the Challenge?

How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming soon! I find the teachers speak more quickly than usual in class now, and we have so much homework and so many exams that we do not have enough time for any after-school activities．Some students did not study hard enough before, but now they have realized the importance of the exam and are putting all their effort into study．During the last month, I am going to listen carefully in class and pay more attention to details, and it is also important for us to keep a balance between study and rest． I'm sure we will do well in the coming exam if we try our best!

【解析】本文属于材料作文，要表达如今的学习和以前的区别以及你的计划和打算。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如usual，so much，after-school activities，the importance of，put ones effort into，pay attention to，it is adj for sb to do。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。